Winter
Break Descriptive Essay
Have you ever experienced a wonderful getaway at the
beach with friends and family? It is with no doubt a relaxing and peaceful
moment one could ever experience in their life. I like to see it as a time of
happiness where you let yourself go and feel free to course around to the
calming waters and its glamorous waves. It is a wonderful sensation to perceive
the soothing sound of the beautiful waves as you trout around the soft, but
sizzling sand. You start encountering burning sensations on your sensitive
foot, but then here comes the refreshing water to eject that feeling, soothe,
and relax your foot.
It was a Tuesday morning where I woke up to the sound of
the birds chirping and hearing those annoying vehicles driving through a busy
road. My apartment was filled with lots of noise coming from the neighbor’s kid’s
screams and shouts while playing outside. Since it was winter break, my family
and I decided we wanted to leave sight of the house, where we’ve been at most
of our time during this vacation. We decided we shall visit a calm and relaxing
place so we came upon Santa Monica Beach and it’s relishing Pier. The moment I
stepped out the door I knew it was a perfect time to head to the beach. It was
a sunny and bright morning where you can feel the warm gleams of the sun shoot
right through your body that it makes you shiver from how warm its rays are.
Knowing it was a busy day, I knew that the bus ride was
going to be crammed full of people. It was as we expected, all seats were full
and we were dammed because it was going to be a long ride. I made it an
enjoying start of a trip for myself because I witnessed every sight of the
streets that surrounded me looking at the busy streets of Santa Monica and the
people that were touring around it. There were plenty of people enjoying their
time walking in and out of stores and eating at their most beloved restaurant.
It was one pleasant cruise as I waited to arrive at my destination, where my
family and I will enjoy our visit.
The door of the bus opened at our stop and it was one
very virtuous sensation. I could feel the fresh, cool breeze strike and
puncture my warm body as I was one step closer to reaching the beautiful beach.
It was an amazing view from the streets because you are able to witness an
overview of the whole beach itself. The people roaming the streets were ready
to dive into the beach with their boogie boards in hand and go as deep as
possible. With a sight up into the sky, you can see the vast number of white
seagulls with their enormously long yellow beak and find their next victim to
take their food from and make their visit hell.
We walked along the warm, but soft sand in search for a
comfortable place to settle and enjoy the glamorous view of the water and its
ravishing waves. The moment I stepped into the water, I was very astonished by
how wonderful the cold water felt. It was a moment where I felt like it was
running and circulating my whole body, a sensation like if you were to jump
into a tub of ice. The sound of the beautiful waves gave peace to my ears as I
cruised around the ocean’s waters. An experience as if you were living heaven
down on earth. The beach is just an incredible experience that is worth every
moment spent on it; one that is unforgettable with all its pleasant memories.
You are able to see all the other people that surround you who are also having
and enjoying a time of their life with other friends and family filled with joy
and peace that nature brings us.
It was also a pleasant time walking up to the Pier and
getting on their tremendous attractions filled with lots of screams and
laughter that expresses happiness and joy among one another. It was the world
famous Ferris Wheel that made it a wonderful time because it was a relaxing and
peaceful moment where you get to spectate the fabulous view of the ocean and
the entire city itself. Nature is one remarkable gift the world brings us and
allows us to experience moments like these.
Great essay. Uses a lot of details and fully explains the experience that you have went through, allowing the reader picture the scene the author is writing about. However there are a few grammar mistakes here and there and some sentences may be a little too wordy causing the text to lose its true impact and at times confuses the reader. Overall this essay was a pleasant read.
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